"Oh Day of Fire and Sun"

Hi people,

Here is a little poetry from my kitty. I actually din't know how to end it. I could think of so many things, but not one was cogent enough to fit into as the last lines of this metaphysical interpretation of the Fire and Sun, usually perceived as violent and torrid.

Oh day of fire and sun,
Pure as a naked flame,
Blue sea, blue sky and dun
Sands where he spoke my name;

Laughter and hearts so high
That the spirit flew off free,
Lifting into the sky
Diving into the sea;

Oh day of fire and sun
Like a crystal burning,
Slow days go one by one,
But you have no returning.

Composed by,
Praveen Chandar.